Thursday, May 28, 2009

Friday Flash 55- Step One


Every Friday, compose a short story of 55 words -
no more, no less. if you want to join in the
fun and games and give it a try...post your story
and report to the boss G-Man!



No longer able to deny the truth. Rationalizations and false pretenses
begin to feel malignant. Unable to look in the mirror without

shame it was time something had to change.

Surrendering my will and learning to have faith has melted

away the pain of addiction.

gratitude cannot express what I have, Freedom from Active Addiction.


Here you go G-Man, hope you all have a great weekend, I will be giving comments tomorrow but will be away from my computer the rest of the weekend. Will be back on Sunday if I am not too tired will leave a post then.

15 comments:

Shadow said...

brilliant!

Lou said...

I'm so glad you are among the truly living..spiritually, physically, emotionally!

Dr.John said...

A 55 with a message and a testimony.
Good 55

Pat said...

Nice one, I know what you mean!

Fandango said...

Freedom is a great thing.
We poor dragons aren't free to eat people any more but we are sort of free.
This was a very good 55

Our 55 is posted.

Hootin' Anni said...

Beautifully stated. This could so be 'not fiction' in a thousand ways and more...for all of us.

My fantasy fiction is posted below my Friday's Show n Tell [as always]. Come on over if you can find time, to read mine. There is a direct link to it at the top of my Friday Blog.

Have a super weekend.

aliceaudrey said...

So you "hit the wall." It's good you found the bottom before it was too late.

Cat said...

Wow. Wonderfully done!

Syd said...

Good one. Lots to be grateful for.

Indigo said...

Wisdom of the profound kind. (Hugs)Indigo

G-Man said...

I loved this 55!!!
It gives us all hope in these troubled times.
Thank You for sharing this very uplifting contribution...
Have a Great Week-End...G

Mama Zen said...

Malignant. Perfect word choice.

Mona said...

True, it can be malignant as you say. but Faith can work wonders. Great 55ve!

ciara said...

i'm glad you were able to break away and experience freedom. fantastic 55. i'm up over at ramblings and whatnot.

Cat said...

This was brilliant!!!