Thursday, January 6, 2011

flash Fiction Friday- our moments, again

Flash fiction friday;
Every Friday write a short story, poem or prose, of
55 words, no more, no less and then report it to the g-man!!

'today as i watch you sleep soundly in bed
passion fills my heart and swirls in my head

my days are so filled with children crying and house cleaning
sometimes i will wonder, where is the meaning

and each night as we lay together again
my hearts light with relief ready to begin again'

 here you go g-man, OK so i am feeling a little corny for today's flash fiction, it is just where i am. isolated from a lot of the world and living with this wonderful family free from chaos and animosity. i am very grateful for my life today. there is a lot of peace here in my heart. thank you to all who have made such a wonderful contribution to me through this blog. i get more from you guys than my real life friends and that is the truth. i think and hope that i will always find time for this blog and stopping by to check on you guys is a must for me in the morning. i am tired from a long day today. the kids were extra whiny and i don't know why but we played outside in the most beautiful January weather i have seen in a long time. and there is snow in our future they say. i guess time will tell. lucky for us we have wonderful coats to get us through the rough weather. so for today's thought;

"To swear off making mistakes is easy. All you have to do is swear off having ideas."- Leo Burnett


g-man said...

Susie this isn't corny, it's sweet!
Thank you so much for this grateful 55.
You Rock baby!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...


My hope is that someday you will find yourself surrounded by friends who reflect more than the blogs do in friendship and love. That you find yourself surrounded by a wonderful "real" fellowship that surpasses this one! Not that we aren't real, but we can't hug you daily for real, just cyber hugs and lots of words of encouragement and truth!

(((((HUGS))))) Suzie!

Eaton Bennett said...

You are a fortunate women that you can find your way right back to what's most important by the end of the day...some people never realize.

Happy New Year, Suzie.

Eaton :))

lime said...

not corny, just an expression of how blessed you are to have a partner in whom you find refuge and refreshment.

Akelamalu said...

Maybe corny but it's romantic - I love romantic! :)

izzy said...

I can relate! my kids are animals though...sleeping peacefully is wonderous! Thanks.

Brian Miller said...

beautiful 55...i know just the feeling...smiles.

Mama Zen said...

What a lovely 55!

Shadow said...

aaawwwwww, how sweet!

Jannie Funster said...

This is so NOT corny, it teared me up with the truth of lasting love, and all it takes to keep it singing.


Monkey Man said...

Speaking from the heart. That is also how my 55 goes today. I know it isn't "fiction" but G can just chill for a week.

joanny said...

This is lovely,,,, tender, poignant truthful, the children will grow before you know it then nostalgia sets in -- go figure we quickly forget how tired and what a blur life was -- at least that is how it was for me, now they are grown, sigh! and I miss the noise and chaos -the ups and downs ,, a journey through life -- it gives meaning & purpose to us in this incredible place in which we share.
I have seen many a strong bonded friendship start through this blogging with many folks.

A lovely write,,,

Busy Bee Suz said...

Well if that is corny....I think it is sweet and honest.
Glad your heart is full today, that is the very best way to feel!

moondustwriter said...

Love the quote
Glad you have those precious ones to enjoy. I'm going to have two leave this fall :(

My writing is becoming my baby

best to you as you love your family

Syd said...

Really nice Suzie. It sounds very peaceful and loving. Glad that you love your children so much.

Pain SUX said... that is SOOOO not corny!! I love it. My days are filled with exactly the same and I love it :)

Btw, I totally love this idea of Flash Ficiton Friday, I'm going to give it a shot :)